Starfish Island
By Sophie Lear
STAR FISH ISLAND
CHAPTER 1
Once upon a time there was a horse this horse was called biscuit and she had lots of friends, and she had a couple of sisters. There names was: candy, poppy,sunbeam and Lilly. Her friends was called: folly, sugar, shelly, twinkle. One day biscuit wanted to play tag by the river, and only poppy and lilly wanted to play with her.
[ they loved to play tag, they love to]
So they played together peacefully in till poppy accidentally pushed biscuit into the river, poppy cried “oops, I didn’t mean to do that!”
Then biscuit fell into the river, she fell right down to the bottom. Fish swam by and thought it was a sea-horse with legs. Then a sea-horse swam by and looked curiously at whisper and zoomed at her, she fed her a special sea-weed( that made her breath in the water) then she woke up and said “were am I?” then the sea -horse said “under the river! Were else?!” confused she said her name. The sea-horse said “ my name is whisper” and she told her about starfish island and took her there.
“ O ,wow!” biscuit breathed “ its beautiful.” So they explored starfish island. After whisper showed biscuit her island, biscuit thought that her sisters would be worried so she told whisper she had to go home. “Come back soon.” whisper shouted after her, “I will” whisper shouted back. But unfortunately biscuit found her sisters fighting! !What are you doing?” biscuit asked, her sisters turned around in disgrace and snapped back “ what are you doing here?” but before biscuit said anything she heard a little voice “ biscuit, biscuit, its me, whisper. We need your help, starfish island is in trouble, the sharks are coming.” before saying anything she walked back and walked back in till she fell in the water. She met whisper at starfish island and said “I know who could help you” she said its a dolphin, but not just a dolphin, this dolphin can fly!” “huh?” whisper said “ I didn’t know dolphins can fly!” so biscuit sent her pigeon who works for the dolphin. “ hammy get flipper for me and give him this.” ordered biscuit . So hammy grabbed the letter and flew off. “ flipper , flipper, biscuit needs you” replied
Hammy . Then as soon as flipper read it he took off . Mean while, biscuit was having an argument with her sisters , then she saw flipper and walked back and fell in to the water. “ flipper your here, o! met whisper the seahorse” said biscuit “ I am hereto scare off the sharks aren’t I .” sighed flipper . The very next morning whisper screamed because a shark was coming , then she edged the corner as the shark came closer . Then poor whisper shut her eyes in fear as she was going to die, but then suddenly flipper leaped on the shark and yelled “ run away quick , I will do the rest!” so they squirmed off.
A few hours later biscuit and whisper were bored of watching but before they toddled off the shark was scared off. “ I did it girls, starfish island is safe.” flipper said proudly. “ thanks .” whisper breathed. “ well, id better be going, byyyyyye !” shouted flipper. All the sea horses did amazing trick and swam off.
The end.
STAR FISH ISLAND
CHAPTER 1
Once upon a time there was a horse this horse was called biscuit and she had lots of friends, and she had a couple of sisters. There names was: candy, poppy,sunbeam and Lilly. Her friends was called: folly, sugar, shelly, twinkle. One day biscuit wanted to play tag by the river, and only poppy and lilly wanted to play with her.
[ they loved to play tag, they love to]
So they played together peacefully in till poppy accidentally pushed biscuit into the river, poppy cried “oops, I didn’t mean to do that!”
Then biscuit fell into the river, she fell right down to the bottom. Fish swam by and thought it was a sea-horse with legs. Then a sea-horse swam by and looked curiously at whisper and zoomed at her, she fed her a special sea-weed( that made her breath in the water) then she woke up and said “were am I?” then the sea -horse said “under the river! Were else?!” confused she said her name. The sea-horse said “ my name is whisper” and she told her about starfish island and took her there.
“ O ,wow!” biscuit breathed “ its beautiful.” So they explored starfish island. After whisper showed biscuit her island, biscuit thought that her sisters would be worried so she told whisper she had to go home. “Come back soon.” whisper shouted after her, “I will” whisper shouted back. But unfortunately biscuit found her sisters fighting! !What are you doing?” biscuit asked, her sisters turned around in disgrace and snapped back “ what are you doing here?” but before biscuit said anything she heard a little voice “ biscuit, biscuit, its me, whisper. We need your help, starfish island is in trouble, the sharks are coming.” before saying anything she walked back and walked back in till she fell in the water. She met whisper at starfish island and said “I know who could help you” she said its a dolphin, but not just a dolphin, this dolphin can fly!” “huh?” whisper said “ I didn’t know dolphins can fly!” so biscuit sent her pigeon who works for the dolphin. “ hammy get flipper for me and give him this.” ordered biscuit . So hammy grabbed the letter and flew off. “ flipper , flipper, biscuit needs you” replied
Hammy . Then as soon as flipper read it he took off . Mean while, biscuit was having an argument with her sisters , then she saw flipper and walked back and fell in to the water. “ flipper your here, o! met whisper the seahorse” said biscuit “ I am hereto scare off the sharks aren’t I .” sighed flipper . The very next morning whisper screamed because a shark was coming , then she edged the corner as the shark came closer . Then poor whisper shut her eyes in fear as she was going to die, but then suddenly flipper leaped on the shark and yelled “ run away quick , I will do the rest!” so they squirmed off.
A few hours later biscuit and whisper were bored of watching but before they toddled off the shark was scared off. “ I did it girls, starfish island is safe.” flipper said proudly. “ thanks .” whisper breathed. “ well, id better be going, byyyyyye !” shouted flipper. All the sea horses did amazing trick and swam off.
The end.

1 Comments:
At 8:12 PM,
pony girl said…
thanks, yes i will make new stories, infact i'm writing one now.
sophie lear
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